I haven’t written one in a while,
However, I have a new
hairstyle and lifestyle
out and through.
I like people too quick.
It is what has broke
me. I need to be strong and thick
that no one can smoke me.
My lungs have been treated badly,
I have liquidated my brain,
I have danced madly
and I have tried to kiss in pain.
It’s only the beginning of February
and already, I have already grown too close,
all I can do is dance and sing like a falling fairy,
let’s just close our lids and smell roses
and forget Febuarary.
This is a poem about my February so far.
Astrid X
I love this poem! Please stay safe, and be happy because it sounds like your year is already a bit terrible.
Like seeing you back online!
Erin x
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🙂 X
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Astrid, this was… wow. What a beautiful piece of writing. I love your style so much! It seems like you’ve already been through a lot in February alone. Healing takes time but I’m positive you’ll get to a true happy place again eventually. Just remember that no matter how right or wrong some decisions may seem at the moment, at least you’re moving forward through them.
“I like people too quick.
It is what has broke
me. I need to be strong and thick
that no one can smoke me.”
— These few lines are by far my favourites and sort of a mantra to live by. I might actually write that down and hang it somewhere because I like it so much!
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Ah geez, thank you 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and thank you for such a lovely comment. I’m going to try and make the rest of my Febuary the best that it can be 🙂
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This was so beautifully expressed, and every line seemed to come straight from your heart, which is one of the main things I look for in poetry, as well as what makes each word come alive.
Thank you for sharing this piece.
🙂
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I’m glad that you liked the poem. All poems that I write all have a massive meaning to them from me and I’m glad you saw that I put my heart into it 🙂
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I hope you’re okay – this was a beautiful poem and full of imagery; I loved it xx
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Your writing is always so beautiful, because you can tell that you really mean every word you write, and that every line is heartfelt and true. Hope you’re OK — sending hugs XXX
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Thank you very much X
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I love your writing style, it just feels so heartfelt, and I can really relate to your feelings.
It’s good to see you back online a bit more, and I hope you’re starting to put yourself back together again Xx
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Aw thank you X
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Hi! I nominated you for the Liebster Award 😊
https://omgryry.wordpress.com/2018/02/15/2nd-liebster-award-get-to-know-me-more/
Ryry xx
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Thank you so much for the nomination but I’ve already done it, very much appreciated though 🙂 X
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Oh it’s okay 😊
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Wow! I have been going through your blog posts and uncovering secrets about my own life. I also have a blog about my teenage experiences at teenagerintraining.com. Feel free to check it out and give me feedback.
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